English please

[Keerulz]

Hallo Leute
Ich soll für die Schule eine kleinigkeit über London schreiben und habe mir diese 2 Sachen ausgesucht. Könntet ihr mal bitte drüber schauen und mir die Rechtschreibfehler zeigen?
Das wäre super

Buckingham Palace
The Buckingham Palace was built 1703 by the Duke (Herzog) of Buckingham John Sheffield.
Today it is the official residence of the british monarchs. Every important political meeting takes place here. The Buckingham Palace is a tourist magnet and one of the emblems of London. Its also famoust for it guards who are standig motion less infront of the Gates.
The Palace has 775 rooms and there are 450 people employed.

London eye
The London Eye ore Millennium Wheel is 135 meters high. It is the largest ferri whel (Riesenrad) in europe and the third biggest in the world. It was built 1999 and it has become the most popular tourist attraction in Great Britain. It symbolizes the new and modern London in the contrary to the hystorical old London wich is underlined by the old buildings like Big Ben ore the Tower Bridge.

 

[Keerulz]

puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuush

 

[Golan]

Nur kurz drüber gelesen. Man könnte ein paar Sachen schöner formulieren, aber scheint ganz solide zu sein.

Buckingham Palace
The Buckingham Palace was built in 1703 by the Duke (Herzog) of Buckingham, John Sheffield.
Today it is the official residence of the British monarchs (royal family). Every important political meeting takes place here. The Buckingham Palace is a tourist magnet and one of the emblems of London. Its also famous for it guards who are standing motionless in front of the Gates.
The Palace has 775 rooms and there are 450 people employed.

London eye
The London Eye ore Millennium Wheel is 135 meters high. It is the largest ferry wheel (Riesenrad) in Europe and the third biggest in the world. It was built 1999 and it has become the most popular tourist attraction in Great Britain. It symbolizes the new and modern London in the contrary to the historical old London which is underlined by the old buildings like Big Ben ore the Tower Bridge.

 

[Wilma]

Buckingham Palace
The Buckingham Palace was built 1703 by the Duke (Herzog) of Buckingham John Sheffield.
Today it is the official residence of the british monarchs. Every important political meeting takes place here. The Buckingham Palace is a tourist magnet and one of London´s emblems. It is also famous for its guards who keep standing motionless in front of the Gates.
The Palace has 775 rooms and 450 employees.

London eye
The London Eye or Millennium Wheel is 135 meters high. It is the largest ferri wheel (Riesenrad) in Europe and the third biggest in the world. It was built 1999 and it has become the most popular tourist attraction in Great Britain. It symbolizes the new and modern London compared to the historical old London wich is underlined by the old buildings like Big Ben or the Tower Bridge.

und "ore" gibbet nicht, sondern "or"^^
mist, golan hat noch nen paar andere gefunden^^

 

[AKira223]

Tja, jetzt, wo man kevin1gamer gebraucht hätte, ist er weg.

Ich persönlich würde eher zu "famous for it guards" neigen (it ohne s). Mit "its" klingt es bissel merkwürdig.
Mh, vielleicht könnte es auch nur "famous for its guard" heißen. Denn wieviel Regimenter hat der BP? Doch nur eine. o_0 oder lieg ich jetzt falsch

naja, is ja auch schon halb 4

 

[KaiKai]

its ist schon richtig
... is 135 meters tall
was built in

 

[Keerulz]

okay, danke soweit. Jetzt muss ich nur noch eine Einleitung fertig machen. Wäre also cool wenn ihr heut Nachmittag nochmal reinschauen würdet

 

[Keerulz]

London is the capital of England and it is with more than 7,5 million inhabitants the most populous (bevölkerungsreich) city of Europe.
It has approximately (ca.) 200 different nations, which are all living peacfully together.
London has many beautiful sights and attractions which makes this city definitely lovely (sehenswert).
There are 3 several ways to get to London. The first and of course most comfortable is by plan. If you take the plane, it is possible that you will arrive at the Heathrow Airport, which is the largest airport in Europe.
The second opportunity is by the Euro Tunnel, which is 38km long and much faster then the last opportunity; the farry.
In the following lines we want to show you the most popular sights and emblems of London.

was meint ihr?

 

[Keerulz]

nochmal ein kleiner push, sry!

 

[Liontiger]

London is the capital of England and it is with more than 7,5 million inhabitants the most populous (bevölkerungsreich) city of Europe.
It has approximately (ca.) 200 different nations, which are all living peacefully together.
London has many beautiful sights and attractions which makes this city definitely lovely ( worth seeing klingt besser finde ich ich).
There are 3 different ways to get to London. The first and of course most comfortable is by plane. If you take the plane, you will possibly arrive at the Heathrow Airport, which is the largest airport in Europe.
The second opportunity is by the Euro Tunnel, which is 38km long and much faster then the last opportunity; the ferry.
In the following lines we want to show you the most popular sights and emblems of London.

einiges klingt da noch ziemlich merkwürdig meiner Meinung nach^^ sind allerdings vllt. auch nur Formulierungssachen, die zwar komisch klingen aber stimmen, die werd ich nicht korrigieren

 

[OliViero]

London is the capital city of Great Britain and it is with more than 7,5 million inhabitants the most densely populated (=dichtbevölkerteste) city of Europe.
It has approximately (ca.) 200 different nations, which are all living peacfully together.

Der obere Satz tönt für mich generell falsch. Eher:

London is also an cultural metropolis with people from over 200 different countries living together in peace.

London has many beautiful sights and attractions which makes this city definitely worth visiting.
There are three different possibilities to get to London. The first and of course most comfortable is traveling by plane. If you take the plane, it is possible that you will arrive at the Heathrow Airport, which is the largest airport in Europe.
The second possibility is passing the Euro Tunnel, a 38 km long tunnel under the sea. The last possibility is using the ferry boat.
In the following lines we want to show you the most popular sights and emblems of London.


Resultat:
London is the capital city of Great Britain and it is with more than 7,5 million inhabitants the most densely populated (=dichtbevölkerteste) city of Europe. London is also an cultural metropolis with people from over 200 different countries living together in peace.

London has many beautiful sights and attractions which make this city definitely worth visiting.
There are three different possibilities to get to London. The first and of course most comfortable is traveling by plane. If you take the plane, it is possible that you will arrive at Heathrow Airport, the largest airport in Europe.
The second possibility is passing the Euro Tunnel, a 38 km long tunnel under the sea. The last possibility is using the ferry boat.
In the following lines we want to show you the most popular sights and emblems of London.

 

[Keerulz]

Vielen Dank an alle

 

[metri]

London has many beautiful sights and attractions which make this city definitely worth visiting.

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London has many beautiful sights and attractions what makes this city definitely worth visiting.


Hoffe bin damit nicht zu spät dran, aber das war auch noch das einzige was mir noch aufgefallen ist - und ist wohl auch kein gravierender Fehler.

btw. "ore" gibts es :P

 

[Wordone]

London has many beautiful sights and attractions which make this city definitely worth visiting.

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London has many beautiful sights and attractions making this city definitely worth visiting.


Benutz ich immer lieber, des Ausdrucks wegen

 

[Keerulz]

ist zwar zu spät, aber dennoch nicht sinnlos